I TRIED…..I DID!

Blood dropping from my marauded flesh,

Death, slowly, taking me in its captive hold,

It’s hurting but I crawl towards the senseless figure

With closed eyes, in which my entire world would behold.

I remember the day we started our tour of well being,

Looking at those eternal eyes, my entire day would go by,

Shivering in cold was I and the wounds worsened my case,

But caring about self, was a rule, for her which didn’t apply.

Her single bruise would have driven me mad,

Because she was not a part, but the complete me,

Today when I raise her up my lap and call,

I see a battered, wounded self, though I believe this isn’t she.

One day she fell and I closed that path forever,

Without looking at her face, I resigned to start my day,

Now I run and run, with her in my hands, to make her feel a bit,

Tried all I could do and m still at it, so silent still she would lay.

Got hit were we when driving our thing,

She confronted the wrath, evaded me getting hit,

Secluded place and the sun was blazing hot,

I, with my, weakened hands, touched, but she wouldn’t move a bit.

Critical is she, because those beautiful eyes are lost,

Brown, deep and enchanting were they, only few of their kind,

Years passed and she is here typing this for me,

Now I love her more than before, as she the only hope, when now, I am “BLIND”

FREEWAY………

Step aside as my vehicle is gonna hit the road,

Trembling will be the floundering sculptures,

Wish them luck and hope the street is a bit broad,

Cos I am gonna tear this FREEWAY into ruptures.

Fate, for me destined my ride,

Wondered why I was so late though!

On switching the ignition I never took such pride,

But now , even to me the swiftest, is gonna bow.

Roads are small when I collate ‘em with my dream,

Though shining like armour of a robust knight,

Winner’s badge rests on my chest and I do have a scheme,

To labour and challenge the FREEWAY with my all congregated might.

My kin once said “you will go places, son”,

 “But drive slow we often hear many people say”,

I believe sloth and apathy have lived their day,

and today speed is the only way to win life’s FREEWAY.

BEING HAPPY…

Woke up with a broken jaw and later broke my fist,

Went to my doc, where he told, I developed an incurable cyst

Going to work, fell in the mud and was all dirt clad,

Smile was which I never lost and nothing made me sad

Lost my job and landlord threw me out of the house,

Was searching my lost key in the dump, aah! , got bitten by a mouse

Bruised finger, tattered clothes but still a smiling me,

Same was I, years back when robbed off my entire college fee.

Was urgent but still I missed the last train,

Got an x-ray of my head and found, alas “I never had a brain!”

People laughed and made fun of me in the broad day light  ,

I smiled the incident off when I knew I had an option to fight.

Neither a coward, nor a nerd, nor a geek was I,

But I chose to walk along, smiling, like a steady passer-by,

Achieved everything in my quest and now so happy do I lay,

I won the game of life because “BEING HAPPY” was my quote of day.

THIS ONE IS FOR YOU…..SUKI DI

♠UNKNOWN LEAF♠

A strong breeze blew and brought an unknown leaf;

Threw it away but days after picked it, as I had a belief,

Wiping, with it, my old tears to make my charm grow new,

It did all, silently, without saying that it was you.

My love left me deserted, but the leaf never parted way,

 Slept beside me all night and slowly in my ear it would say,

“Never throw me the way you did the very first time”

I kept it for long and was ceased to commit the smallest of crime

Changed my ways, changed my whims, chained my brutal self,

Lost it somewhere and in my old memories I, had to delve,

What was it, in front of which I couldn’t even lie?

Why are tears rolling down my cheeks, when I don’t want to cry!

I grew old, but could never diminish the pain,

That I felt on loosing the leaf as it made me sane,

Now I stand amidst a storm, folding hands and pray,

Kill me soon and spare me the bane or send the same leaf back again.

♥X and Y...A HISTORY IN MAKING♥

Life gives a chance to everybody;the difference between a success and a failure is not about destiny,its about looking out to the destiny and holding its hand when it wants to escort you.For me X and Y is my destiny,my love ,my dream.I have seen a lot in my life,both good and evil,both real and vague,both in and out,but what's the point if I keep all my experiences,my so small yet so pronounced ones,just to myself and not share them with my loved ones.We feel sorry for the dumb and illiterate , who can't express themselves to the extent they want to,but what is the use of feeling bad,we won't be a bit better  if we don't voice our emotions and sentiments to people.We all do or try to do it,the only difference is that I am trying to do it a bit differently,in form of a Book,My Book,X and Y.


This 'would be' Book of mine,centers around two characters,two entirely independent individuals,one being X and other being Y.The parallel ongoing plot continues,portraying both their Life sagas in a descriptive manner with twists and turns,each being tensed,happy,dubious etc in their respective individualities.Even with both the characters being of opposite sex,this is ,by no stretches of imagination,a LOVE STORY.The individuals meet at the very end chapter of the book and their acquaintance results in the unfolding of several untold mysteries of their respective lives;now what the mysteries are ,how they fall into them,and how they unfold,comprises the entire storyline.

A saga of lust,deceit,friendship,romance,betrayal and many more human traits,X and Y promises to be a bet worth gaming for.I wish all my readers and close ones to pray for me so that I , be able to present to you,the most unexpected story ever told ,in the form of my Book,as soon as possible.

I saw a dream, I had a vision,come help me make it a success,because there is a saying; "FIGHT FOR YOUR DREAMS AND YOUR DREAMS WILL FIGHT FOR YOU".....and I am fighting♥♥♥

♠Kites.......soaring high♠

Saw the film today,after days of waiting .Heard varied comments but had to see by myself how it shaped up and what i found out ,I was pleasantly surprised.

Acting stole the show,I must say.the story wasn't the strongest but the characters did justice to the content.CINEMATOGRAPHY  and PICTURIZATION  were the strong points barring the strongest point of the film i.e. THE HRITHIK ROSHAN,he was brilliant throughout ,till the end and with his acting kept the audience interested.the chemistry between BARBARA and HRITHIK took the center stage though I heard it being criticized by many.Many said the chemistry lacked the oomph but pardon me they should first take their own chemistry classes.The action sequences looked original and were well timed.The advent of Spanish in the indian films is also worth applauding.The critics and some of the viewers said that the film was shunned due to its more than required Spanish and English content,to which i would like to say it was a kind of crossover love story and the content and usage of the Spanish language were apt,subtitles in Hindi caused a bit of discomfort though but that much pain was worth while for such a nice film.Other stars also shone in their respective roles though i feel an actress of kangana's calibre should have been used a bit more.The music was beautiful to say the least and complememnted the scenes really well.As far as the dance sequence is concerned should i need to write when HRITHIK performed it,still was breathtaking.All together it was an HRITHIK-BARBARA film more than anything,I could just see them and their profound love.


Overall in a nutshell i would like to say,A PREDICTABLE STORY WITH UNPREDICTABLE CAMERA WORK AND ACTING ,A VISUAL DELIGHT ,A WELL ENACTED FILM MADE WITH LOT OF LOVE,PANACHE AND GRIT....SO IF U ARE A ROMANTIC MOVIE BUFF ,ITS A MUST AND EVEN IF NOT I WOULD SAY ITS A SURE ONE TIME WATCH.SO GO, WITH KITES ,RISE HIGH IN LOVE........................ 

♠♠♠My ratings  --- 7.5 out of 10  ♠♠♠

Theatre of odds

I played foul on streets of insanity,

Though the rumor reached me late,

Crouching under me was my solitude alive,

But Theatre of odds had me under its bait.

I tried to break free and succumbed in a way,

Though I fought  ,I wasn’t left a choice but to pay,

Things worsened out as I had on my face a false grin,

Can’t run though, Theatre of odds knew I committed a sin.

 Recalled I played a part once in the theatre,

Commissions were less and fortune were meager,

Had to part ways as I wanted peace to earn,

It didn’t leave me though and made my inner conscience burn.

I did wrong but I won’t be returning back,

Because the world I left was dark and pitch black,

Hated myself but now I do love my deeds,

 Theatre of odds fulfilled all my desires, but never met my needs.

She was here

I saw her face hidden beneath mine;

Her voice sounded better than the jingle of chime,

I didn’t look back for her treaded steps,

But ‘she was here’ awaiting me, vespers nine;

I followed what my heart said to me

With my friends, was I, shared my moment of glee

Felt nothing because my eyes were blind

That ‘she was here’ which I couldn’t see

My recital went well, where I sang a song

None applauded as what I chose was very wrong

I , with tears in heart, walked of the podium

Though ‘she was here’ holding my hand along

Wrath was my ally as it liked very few,

Flowing in me like collected drops of dew

Wrath closed my fists but said in seclusion

Yes ’she was here’ waiting just for you

Winter

Settling Dew on the frozen leaf;

Fur covering creatures prolonged sleep; yet so brief

Misted land with an appealing charm,

Heaven on earth, seen, just standing on a cliff.

Babies crouching tightly to the quilt, feeling warm;

Tender sky embraces sunlight, setting on every farm

Picturesque scenery applauding nature’s bounty

Enigmatic breeze pulling us with its nostalgic arm;

Day breaks and sleep opens its lock;

Lazy morning follows leading many a flock;

Cozy dawn followed by a monotonous day;

Slowly, dusk arrives, blowing cold winds, to trespasser’s dismay;

A season full of bosoms, a time of quieted charisma;

A phase of chilled entity and frozen enigma

Mood swings do occur, while inner lays a belief;

It will end someday and the sky will turn a new leaf;